Lost Soul
Soulful is how I first described your eyes
And souls don’t ever die, you know
I’ve been reading you for a long time now
You’ve been letting me look right into you
And glimpse serene Wonderland through your eyes.
You weren’t born to be world-weary or even worldly-wise
Please, don’t grieve so much… I so much want to keep you from shattering
But perhaps paradise must weather its hailstorms and snows too
Still, when winter is here, can spring be far behind?
I’m waiting. I miss your soulful eyes.
Hey–wow! Great writing…my only complaint is that it reminds me of how shoddy and talentless I am, and my many failed attempts at poetry..sigh. If only I could write.
Anyways! Im trying to get around to as many Indian bloggers as I can, asking for their help so I’ll stop there- I’m an Australian Indian doing a major work where I need heaps of surveys filled out, which is really hard for me considering I don’t know many Indians living in India. So it would be really awesome if you had the time to visit my online survey and fill it out. Heres the site–
http://www.my3q.com/home2/107/elizag/50097.phtml
Thanks heaps!
souled out!!
“I so much want to keep you from shattering
But perhaps paradise must weather its hailstorms and snows too”
sigh
Having dome trouble with your ATOM feed. Can you please verify if wverything’s right?
–gera.
Sadly for me, I am never able to appreciate poetry as much as I can appreciate prose.
I know this is good writing, but I assume you have heard this before. 🙂
wow what a coincidence!! My last post was about “eyes” and here you are with this.Good stuff 🙂
I’ve been waiting since you left me,
Now i’m drowning in a flood,
Baby i’ve always been a fighter,
But without you, i give up.
Forgive my insolence to even think i can understand you, but i feel i can!
I guess this is every blogger’s pain, the fact that every idiot who reads their words thinks he relates….
Mindless ramblings….:)