My smile is like a neon light
Lighting up all around
And drowning out all else
Brilliance in person
It says, “I’m happy!”
Yours is like a candle flame
A single flicker in the darkness
Enveloped in a warm embrace of shadows
It says, “I make you happy.”
And you do.
Oh I absolutely love the poem! I especially love how you speak about two different smiles and connect them together. So I may not have worded what I’m trying to say perfectly, but I am sure you know what I mean.
Anyway, thanks for stopping by 🙂
I was pretty sure I had read your blog as well, when Rohini spoke about you! It’s a shame I didn’t get to hear your poem. Do we get to hear this one at the next poetry slame?
P.S. Loved your skirt.