55 Words: An Idle Mind
When I got tagged in the 55-word story thing, I thought “Oh, help”. Having managed a couple though, I’m hooked….it is tremendously satisfying…just the sort of creative challenge I was looking for. Since I’ve already tagged people, I’ll leave this open to whoever wants to pick it up. You know the rules..have fun!
At the doorway, Luke was saying “This place deserves a name”
The big guy yawned, “I’m bored”
“I’ll cure that” smirked Luke
“Big brothers are such wise guys!”
“Observe, lazy boy”Luke clapped his hands
“LET THERE BE LIGHT”
“Hey….L!” Big Guy squeaked.
“That’s a name…hell! Here…amuse yourself”
And Lucifer went to paint a signboard.
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I thought I had replied to this one with another 55 but I don’t see it; my memory is fuzzy.
@Brad: It was a 55er post. This is a writing exercise to express the same idea as a short, short story.
do you mind having your 55 worders posted here with a link back to your blog?–>
oh let there be light on my brains as I didn’t get it.
Wow! That’s nifty!
dont u think u r overdoing it?
Predictable, but Nice!
still here ..things are moving really fast can’t keep a track anymore 🙂
nice!
WOAH
that was awesome..
have u read the vampire chronicles by anne rice?
there are bits of very very interesting conversations between God and the Devil in them.
i reckon you’ll like it!