Mumbai Haiku
At a one-off Haiku event, I attempted a few of my own. The rules I could remember to follow were:
- A reference to a season/time of the year
- Two distinct images (no similes)
- Three lines (I let the syllable count drop though)
- A full sentence and a sentence fragment
Given that I live in modern-day Mumbai and not picturesque, old-world Japan, my imagery is rather umm….gristly. Be kind.
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I
Cold cream pitches;
The morning train
blows our trumpet
II
Carrot flower;
The sweating bridegroom
goes crunch
III
Cracked soles;
Hot coffee runs
out from below
IV
Hands outstretched
to own the world;
Celluloid king
V
Evening shower;
The Elephant God
goes home
Vivid-I like esp “the morning train blowing our trumpet!
@carpedieum: 🙂 Thank you, I tried.