Hold my hand and fall with me!
I might have, had you asked
But you didn’t
And I thought you wanted to fly
When I said I was leaving,
All you said was,
Goodbye!
If we had jumped,
Maybe you’d have discovered wings
Or I might’ve taught you to swim
Maybe we’d have crashed anyway….together.
Really beautiful…
Somehow I’ve always loved the thought provoking nature of your posts, with so curt words yet all laden with meaning. Seems to me I’m reciting the story of my life.
@ Marielle, Sunshine: Thank you!
reminds me of a jagjit/chitra ghazal…
Duniya Jise kahte hai jadoo ka khilona hai,
mil jaaye tho mitti hai, kho jaaye tho sona hai…
gurl, my house is open- so’s my refrigerator- and it’s stacked with Ice-cream
@Rajni: Can I come too, please! Your refrigerator also has beer, right!
@ Rajni: What’d I do without you, gal? * I get by…with a little help…from my friends…wooohooohooo…*
@ Brad: Stay out! Ladeez wonly!
Brad: i only let poepl who have the time to call me come qand visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, voks and bailey’s Irish as well.
Brad: i only let people who have the time to call me come and visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, vodka and bailey’s Irish as well.
Rajni: I’ll take Bailey’s please….I’m going off the rest for awhile.
@Rajni: I’ll take the rest. I don’t like Bailey’s anyway.
very poignant!!!
Might I say tht wht I smtimes DONT like abt wht u write is that it touches? a bit too deep?
lol..
@ Confusedsoul: Thank you. The situation that inspired the post was, too.
@ ‘nonnymous: That’s a mighty compliment. And its heartening to know other people have been where I was, too.
Ideasmith: maybe more like Im about to rather than been there… and im hoping i’ll have a diff story to tell.
@ ‘nonnymus: All the very best to you then! Just for the record, the story above didn’t turn out too badly. One jumped and flew away and the other took a swim. They just went in different directions, that’s all.
beautifulllll