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  1. Nice one. Loved the subtle sense of not-quite-rightness running through this whole piece. And the fact that you wrote it in 2nd person POV, something you don’t often see (in original fiction, anyway – I’ve mostly read it in fanfiction).

    I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it with us! =)

    1. @SSKuruganti: 🙂 I thought it might be fun to explore the 2nd person POV since most of my blogposts are in 1st person and my fiction is usually in 3rd person. Thank you for noticing that.