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  1. the detailing is getting more interesting, the characters are also quite outlandish…

    1. @ravishankar: Well, this one is part of the Feardom tales which are about the funny/bizzare afterlife world. Outlandish is the need, no?

  2. This one is lovely. As the earlier comment mentions, I think the world is slowly developing in it’s entirety. This one is fine as a vignette, but only that; a sort of origin story.

    1. @febinmathew: I was intending it to be more like Terry Pratchett’s Discworld, with a bunch of various characters who keep popping in and out of each other’s stories. Koriko, for example, appears in both. Goomblegomp may get a story of his own in the future. Or the stories may revolve around Feardom artefacts, rather than characters.

      1. Well, it does have a certain Discworld feel to it.
        You could take several of Pratchett’s own ideas into consideration then.
        Several intersecting story arcs with cross pollinated characters and the artefacts could be central to specific stories

        1. @febinmathew: That is the intention. Koriko for example, shows up in both stories so far. The Factory was one of the places on the tour in the first story. Religious Fear is referenced in both cases as well. There will be more stories, that elaborate ideas dropped in both these stories.

        1. @febinmathew: Will do that. Maybe repeat the story-a-day exercise or just finish the May one since I only did 20 in 31 days. And I will let you know when that happens.

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